[2012.09.01] 苹果vs三星： 触屏争霸，对簿公堂

引用 je331ca 2012-9-4 16:17

本帖最后由 je331ca 于 2012-9-4 17:07 编辑



小小意见，感觉标题很不好翻出原文那个感觉，（“旋律”是不有点跑远？猛一看会有点误会什么的，而且“滑”向法庭，偶个人的感觉是这个比喻有点说不上的感觉...毕竟偶们好像平时里用手机木有专门的词说swipe pinch zoom。）不如脱离原文结构直接表达意思：
苹果VS三星：走向法庭
苹果VS三星：触屏争霸，决战法庭
欧厚厚，这个还是大家比较主观的表达纠结，提出偶的诡异思路，剑刀哥参考下就哦了~


1在截图中，剧中人物展示了一部古怪的三角形平板电脑。2苹果公司广受欢迎的 iPhone （和大多数类似产品一样）采用了圆角矩形的造型，陪审团裁定三星这家韩国公司模仿了该特征。3网上的截图对这一裁定进行了嘲弄。
这句话有点慢驱动的意思啊...句1句2有点衔接不上，乍一看有点突然，随后第三句又绕了回来，有点晕~~
略微调整下也不是不可以偶觉得...
132的顺序就可以，这样比较照顾广大反应慢的读者...^^

网上的截图对这一裁定进行了嘲弄。
“进行”这个词很毁句子啊...一牵就是一串动词...
网络截图嘲弄了这一判决。^^

which is facing a tsunami of patent-related lawsuits
面临海啸..
或者也可以说“在XX类诉讼中掀起轩然大波”~^^
不过还是表达不同啦~~~

作为技术盲偶其实觉得“圆标圆角”这种东东不能说是专利吧...那人家改改弧度稍微圆点呢~唉唉太霸道了~

慢慢继续来看~滚去觅食觅食觅食~

引用 敛刃 2012-9-4 17:52

感谢杰西卡前排支持

Swipe, pinch and zoom to the courtroom
这个标题里的 swipe, pinch 和 zoom to 都是表示触摸屏的动作，这个双关语的确不好翻译，妹纸的第二种译法很好。已经改为“触屏争霸，对簿公堂”了。

which is facing a tsunami of patent-related lawsuits
改为“专利相关诉讼已经在该行业中掀起了轩然大波”

引用 h7ang 2012-9-4 21:00

顶顶更健康

引用 h7ang 2012-9-4 21:07

敛刃 发表于 2012-9-4 17:52
感谢杰西卡前排支持

Swipe, pinch and zoom to the courtroom

你说这个词都是动作 具体指什么呀  我查了下感觉没有靠谱的 也就zoom to 那个是放大意思？还是什么 你能给解释下么 谢谢

引用 敛刃 2012-9-4 21:12

h7ang 发表于 2012-9-4 21:07
你说这个词都是动作 具体指什么呀  我查了下感觉没有靠谱的 也就zoom to 那个是放大意思？还是什么 你能 ...

就是智能手机触摸屏的几个动作。

swipe 指用手指在屏幕上划过，比如从左到右，这样能切换窗口什么的

pinch 指在触摸屏上用食指和中指并拢、张开来放大或者缩小图片、网页什么的

引用 h7ang 2012-9-4 21:20

敛刃 发表于 2012-9-4 21:12
就是智能手机触摸屏的几个动作。

swipe 指用手指在屏幕上划过，比如从左到右，这样能切换窗口什么的

ok受教了

引用 contrary 2012-9-4 21:49

stills from a year-old sitcom episode
一组情景喜剧的截图在网上流传开来
stills 是剧照，莫非这剧在网上播出？

ruling that the South Korean firm had copied the shape of Apple’s wildly popular iPhone
陪审团裁定三星这家韩国公司模仿了该特征
另外既然都告成了，那么就不要用 模仿 这么温和的词了，改 抄袭 如何

陪审团裁定三星这家韩国公司模仿了该特征
挑刺：韩国的三星公司

引用 contrary 2012-9-4 21:50

stills from a year-old sitcom episode
一组情景喜剧的截图在网上流传开来
stills 是剧照，莫非这剧在网上播出？

ruling that the South Korean firm had copied the shape of Apple’s wildly popular iPhone
陪审团裁定三星这家韩国公司模仿了该特征
另外既然都告成了，那么就不要用 模仿 这么温和的词了，改 抄袭 如何

陪审团裁定三星这家韩国公司模仿了该特征
挑刺：韩国的三星公司

引用 敛刃 2012-9-4 22:05

contrary 发表于 2012-9-4 21:50
stills from a year-old sitcom episode
一组情景喜剧的截图在网上流传开来
stills 是剧照，莫非这剧在网上 ...

反姐你貌似回帖14连击了~K.O.

前两点已经改了。

第三点：
the jury’s ruling that the South Korean firm had copied the shape of Apple’s wildly popular iPhone
我觉得 the South Korean firm 这里指的就是三星，也就是相对美国公司苹果而言的，这是英语里为了避免重复改换的提法。所以译为“三星这家韩国公司”
“韩国的三星公司”似乎还潜台词有“中国的三星公司”、“美国的三星公司”等等。不能完全对应句中的 the South Korean firm。

引用 yannanchen 2012-9-5 01:13

ep·ic (pk)
n.
1. An extended narrative poem in elevated or dignified language, celebrating the feats of a legendary or traditional hero.
2. A literary or dramatic composition that resembles an extended narrative poem celebrating heroic feats.
3. A series of events considered appropriate to an epic: the epic of the Old West.
adj.
1. Of, constituting, having to do with, or suggestive of a literary epic: an epic poem.
2. Surpassing the usual or ordinary, particularly in scope or size: "A vast musical panorama . . . it requires an epic musical understanding to do it justice" (Tim Page).
3. Heroic and impressive in quality: "Here in the courtroom . . . there was more of that epic atmosphere, the extra amperage of a special moment" (Scott Turow).--------------------------------------------------------------------------------

旷日持久？

引用 敛刃 2012-9-5 01:16

yannanchen 发表于 2012-9-5 01:13
ep·ic (pk)
n.
1. An extended narrative poem in elevated or dignified language, celebrating the feat ...

我查到的是 taking place over a long period of time and involving a lot of difficulties. 或许可以译为“漫长而艰难的”？

引用 skylovead 2012-9-5 01:24

引用 yannanchen 2012-9-5 01:41

the look and feel of devices

外观和手感？

引用 敛刃 2012-9-5 01:43

yannanchen 发表于 2012-9-5 01:41
the look and feel of devices

外观和手感？

look 我觉得是外观。feel 会不会是使用的感受，而不仅仅是手感？

引用 yannanchen 2012-9-5 01:44

it will give added ammunition to those

提供额外的炮弹---直译不错啊

引用 敛刃 2012-9-5 01:50

yannanchen 发表于 2012-9-5 01:44
it will give added ammunition to those

提供额外的炮弹---直译不错啊

ammunition 我这里查到的释义：
1. a supply of bullets, etc. to be fired from guns
2. information that can be used against another person in an argument

想必第二种引申义现在用的比较多了吧

引用 yannanchen 2012-9-5 02:04

But other experts worry that design patents in particular are often drawn too broadly

这里的drawn什么意思？

请看下文

One of the most important steps in the patent application process is asserting the claims of your invention.  The claims define the scope of protection that your invention will receive if a patent is granted.  Drafting great patent claims only comes with experience.  If the claims are too narrowly drawn, the invention will not receive the broad protection it otherwise deserves.  On the other hand, if claims are drawn too broadly, the application is likely to be rejected.  We do everything possible to ensure that our clients receive the broadest protection possible while also maintaining the highest likelihood of the patent being granted.

draw 描述？

引用 yannanchen 2012-9-5 02:06

On appeal, aside from arguing that the drug was an obvious extension of the prior art, the generic drug makers argue that the original patent was intentionally drawn too broadly, in order to receive over-reaching patent protection. They also claim that the more narrowly drawn reissued patent did not cure these defects. In addition, the generics allege that original patent applicant, Shionogi (from whom AstraZeneca licenses the Crestor patent), withheld crucial documents from the USPTO in the patent application process.

引用 yannanchen 2012-9-5 02:12

本帖最后由 yannanchen 于 2012-9-5 02:15 编辑

remit
vb [rɪˈmɪt] -mits, -mitting, -mitted (mainly tr)
1. (Business / Commerce) (also intr) to send (money, payment, etc.), as for goods or service, esp by post
2. (Law) Law (esp of an appeal court) to send back (a case or proceeding) to an inferior court for further consideration or action
3. (Law) to cancel or refrain from exacting (a penalty or punishment)
4. (also intr) to relax (pace, intensity, etc.) or (of pace or the like) to slacken or abate
5. to postpone; defer
6. Archaic to pardon or forgive (crime, sins, etc.)
n [ˈriːmɪt rɪˈmɪt]

1. the area of authority or responsibility of an individual or a group by taking that action, the committee has exceeded its remit

2. (Law) the transfer of a case from one court or jurisdiction to another, esp from an appeal court to an inferior tribunal

3. (Law) (Business / Commerce) the act of remitting
4. (Law) (Business / Commerce) something remitted
5. NZ a proposal from a branch of an organization put forward for discussion at the annual general meeting
[from Latin remittere to send back, release, re- + mittere to send]
remittable  adj
remittal  n

1 and 2 are all possible， but I prefer 2.

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