[2012.05.12] 普京重返克里姆林宫

引用 shuimuboya 2012-5-11 16:55

翻译的不错

引用 James_zhou 2012-5-12 07:52

but it may eventually bring about the opposite
但最终会招来反对
个人觉得the opposite译成反对不妥，the opposite是恰恰相反的意思吧，应译成最终会招致动荡。

and 64% think they could be victims of abuse by the police or prosecutors.
64%的人认为自己会受到警察或检察官的迫害。
64%的人认为自己会成为警察或检察官滥用职权的受害者。

引用 James_zhou 2012-5-12 18:06

veep 发表于 2012-5-12 09:31
谢谢您的指点

你的改动非常准确！

客气了，谈不上指导，互相学习吧，译文不错。

引用 Kingsly 2012-5-14 07:05

本帖最后由 Kingsly 于 2012-5-14 07:07 编辑

     Mr Medvedev could conceivably rebuild his career—which many assumed to be over in September, when Mr Putin said he would run again for president—by surrounding himself with loyal, like-minded officials.
     梅德韦杰夫可能会重建自己的事业——很多人认为这项工作在去年九月终止，那个时候普京宣布再次竞选总统，他周围的官员都很忠诚并且和他志趣相投。
    查资料可以了解到，梅德韦杰夫去年提出了一系列的经济改革措施，但由于普京宣布要竞选总统，而外界认为普京将会无悬念的获胜，所以人们认为他的这些举措不大可能会实现，对应原文这部分＂which many assumed to be over in September, when Mr Putin said he would run again for president＂。
        但梅现在被提名为总理并组建新的内阁，梅可以继续提名对他忠心并有相同政见的人作为内阁成员（by surrounding himself with loyal, like-minded officials.），也就有可能继续他的经济改革事业（Mr Medvedev could conceivably rebuild his career） 。当然，这一切还得在普京同意梅的提名的前提下。
    上面是意思上来理解。从语法上，这个句子可以简化成Mr Medvedev could conceivably rebuild his career by surrounding himself with loyal, like-minded officials. 所以楼主的这一句翻译不大准确。   
    这一句大概可以翻译为：梅德韦杰夫似乎可以通过提名一些终忠于他，和他政见一致的内阁成员来继续他未完成的事业-去年9月当普京宣布竞选总统时人们曾认为他的这一事业将无法继续。
        这是我的理解，不知道正不正确，请楼主指正。

引用 veep 2012-5-14 07:54

Kingsly 发表于 2012-5-14 07:05
Mr Medvedev could conceivably rebuild his career—which many assumed to be over in September, w ...

谢谢你，我心里的疑团终于消除啦！

引用 番茄汁 2012-5-15 08:38

引用 番茄汁 2012-5-15 08:39

insist

引用 eaglezyj 2012-5-15 22:44

哇，受用啊，好好学习中

引用 J.16 2012-5-17 20:41

受教了，才知道自己的翻译有多跑偏
提几个问题
1.Were the top economic slots instead filled by officials close to Mr Putin, such as Igor Sechin, a former deputy prime minister, that would signal the opposite.
“对于以前由亲普京的官员（如前副总理塞钦）把持的高层经济部门来说，这可能是个不利信号”
但如果高层的经济职位由亲普京的官员，如前副总理Igor Sechin这类人取代的话，结果则会截然相反。
这里要表达的是他们两个的政治主张的差异，

2.the protest movement risks seeming more radical and left-wing, sapping it of middle-class support, but the state looks clumsy and afraid, its celebration for Mr Putin tarnished by armoured vehicles in the streets.
但是情况令人惶恐不安，走上街头的装甲汽车让普京的庆典黯然失色。
state这里应该指的是国家而不是情况吧？因为最开始说了谁不不是赢家，不是抗议者，也不是国家

3.a rise that Gazprom, among others, has been pushing for some time, but which was delayed until after the election.
这里没怎么看懂，“群起模仿”是怎么看出来的？

我也翻了这篇，请拍砖指教http://www.ecocn.org/thread-67384-1-1.html

引用 veep 2012-5-17 21:27

J.16 发表于 2012-5-17 20:41
受教了，才知道自己的翻译有多跑偏
提几个问题
1.Were the top economic slots instead filled by officia ...

谢谢你的指正，情况这个词是我我根据意思翻译的，在原文里确实是国家的意思。


您的译文我拜读过了 stability译成维稳，很不错。

您的译文清爽典雅，不像我翻译的这篇文字 有点拗口

引用 stjaiwhf1314 2012-6-16 21:43

012.05.12] 普京重返克里姆林宫

引用 Naley 2012-7-24 23:10

The police had cleared the streets of people—supporters and protesters alike—allowing Mr Putin’s motorcade to glide eerily across the capital and through the gates of the Kremlin.
警察清空了上街的人，对支持者和反对者一视同仁? 感觉有些怪，能不能这样理解：为了让普京的车队顺利横穿首都，直通克里姆林宫的大门，警察严禁所有人当天在外，不管支持与否。
a rise that Gazprom, among others, has been pushing for some time, but which was delayed until after the election.
天然气工业股份公司要涨价，其他公司群起效仿？不知哪个词汇的意思是这样的理解？
Were the top economic slots instead filled by officials close to Mr Putin, such as Igor Sechin, a former deputy prime minister, that would signal the opposite.
这是什么句法？Were...that是作何解？一旦。。？

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